Kia Ora Laolao! My name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
Ka Pai! this post is amazing! I love how you have put your walt to explain a little bit about this. I also like the way the text in the slide is easy to read.
It is very important to have a picture of D.L.O in a blog post. It is great that you have a D.L.O. It is great that you have deeply thought about teh questions and I loved what you thought the photos were about.
To improve, maybe explain why you did this and what you think you can improve on next time! Apart from that, great post!
Did you enjoy this? How would you improve this post?
Kia Ora Laolao!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
Ka Pai! this post is amazing! I love how you have put your walt to explain a little bit about this. I also like the way the text in the slide is easy to read.
It is very important to have a picture of D.L.O in a blog post. It is great that you have a D.L.O. It is great that you have deeply thought about teh questions and I loved what you thought the photos were about.
To improve, maybe explain why you did this and what you think you can improve on next time!
Apart from that, great post!
Did you enjoy this? How would you improve this post?
Nga Mihi,
- Julia