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Are dogs better than cats?
That's what people are talking about for the past centuries. Well this essay will tell you all about it Well they are they could even be your best friend (or your only friend ) they are helpful and they could even save your life.
Why dogs are better than cats?
Well people think dogs are better than cats because there caring and they would always want to play and go out for walks but if they are a lazy dog they might not. Dogs are very talented and would do anything for you for a treat or a belly rub unlike cats they would just sit around and eat a lot of food.
Hero dogs!
Some dogs around the world are really talented and brave they could even save your life one day. Some dogs have very special jobs to help people like police dogs they help the cops chase down criminals and because they have a really good sense of smell they could find people that are missing from their families and bring them home. Other special dogs helps people that are in wheelchairs or people that were born with medical
problems some dogs help blind people cross the road and take them back to their home happy and safe.
More about why dogs are better than cats
Dogs are better than cats because dogs are kind some dogs are aggressive but there just trying to protect their owners. Unlike cats they just want the attention and people to give them food.
So are dogs better than cats their playful and they would be the perfect pet or friend. They could save your life one day and their kind of better than cats.
Hey Laolao, It's Katelynn here again from Totara 1 at Grey Main School.
ReplyDeleteI personally think dogs are WAY better than cats. Yes of course I still think cats are cute but dogs are way more talented and I also think they can save your lives. They are great home pets and farm dogs. Cats just walk around all day basically going by the saying 'Eat, Sleep, Walk around , Repeat'... don't you agree!?!? (I added in the walk around bit!!!)
Maybe next time you could give us a few more reasons to why you think dogs are better than cats. Other than that you did a great job!
Katelynn
Totara 1
Kia Ora Laolao, my name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteKa Pai, it looks like you writing is great and it is very nice that you have used headings and subheadings and a bold font that you can read.
I like that you have put opinions as facts and added some actual facts. This reminded me of when we had to do Non - Chronological Reports.
To improve, all I can say is maybe add some personality or a DLO (Digital Learning Object). Also, next time can you please add why you had to do this and what your favourite part was.
Apart from that great post! Also, Dogs are my favourite.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
kia ora Laolao Brayden from yaldhurst school.I Loved this because
ReplyDeleteI think that dogs are better than cats because of how adorable they are
when they are puppys.You brought me back to when I had my first family dog he was adorable as a puppy.How come you did it on cats and dogs because their are other pets people have like fish or snakes.
Do you have a pet
kind regards
brayden
yaldhurst model school